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Vacant Page 1

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I was too excited to wait to show people. Vacant page number one, baby!

I know a lot of words is taboo in comics, but I tried to keep it interesting. Like I said before I would like this to become a web comic. After I finish about 5 pages I will start posting one day a week on my website: [link]

This was inspired by Frank Miller's paneling in Dark Knight Returns.

p.s. If you see any typos tell me. Knowing me, there is 20 in there.
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Holy shit, lady!!! This is fuckin' BOMB! I need more! I'm posting this on facebook NOW!

Also, I think the other readers picked up on the typos before I did! You seem to have fixed them by now.
I think the only awkward spot was the second to last panel. "We will build our crumbled worlds from the ground once again. We will live once again happier than before." I think the repetition in the earlier panels is solid, but the "once again" repetition isn't as strong. Mainly because he's stressing the point that they're going to be happier "once again." Feel like it should be "We will live to be happy once again." This might mess with the flow of your quote in the last panel, but it could be left as is.